For my Senior Project, I focused on alternative medicine and holistic health. My project isn't planned for several weeks but I do plan to host a seminar in which I will teach and instruct students (or whoever attends) various methods to relieve stress and pain without medication.
In regards to my paper I discussed the direct influences of Chinese/Eastern medicine on Western culture. I talked about yoga, acupuncture, and acupressure and its clear availability and integration within the Western world. What worked well was my organization of my paper. I outlined everything and formatted it so that the paragraphs regarding the different subjects mirrored each other. I began with the origins, how it worked, why it worked, and how it came into our culture and its impact.
To make it better I could have used better language or vocabulary in my paper but I wanted it to be clear s I was conflicted on my approach to syntax or sentence structure at times because I worried that I would over complicate things.
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